Jul 24, 2016

Hair in the Laundry

It tickles me
From in my sleeve
Evades my eye
Till I look 'round
And 'round and 'round
And 'round and 'round

A joy of x and x
My x and y
Could never do without

2 comments:

Magyar said...

__I thank you for your visit, and your understanding -knife- comment; here, a humble senryu to parallel the -look 'round-.
__"Till I look 'round" can add a great and fruity filling to that pie! Smiles_!

the mind
becomes a story's oven
this pie

_m

Magyar said...

__Walking through your blog there are many certain, and thoughtful poetics found in your work here! Nifty!
__With your studies of literature, I'm sure you know the forms of Cinquain and Tanka. Oh, this is not a suggestion, I can simply imagine them as a complementary addition to your good, free form verses.
__I thank you for your visit and comment to my blog, please feel free to revisit, you are always welcome.
_m